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After a week in the academy ... Me and Sasuke we are still best friends , Ino and the girls don't bother me anymore and even the way the villagers look at me and my brother like we were monsters or freaks I don't even care anymore, life cant get any better

Naruko's Pov:
In my house
"Hey Naruto wake up , come on Naruto" I said while trying to wake my brother up
"uh..huh I'm ... gonna .... wa..." said Naruto while sleeping
Then I tired to wake him up with another way because I tired to wake him for the 10th time already  so I decided to throw some cold water at him
"AHHHHHHH!!! na..NARUKO!! what? what happened!?" Said Naruto when he was fully awaken
"Hehe nothing come on lets go we are going be late again if you don't get up fast" I replied
"You didn't have to do this TT.TT we are going there don't we? so don't worry" said Naruto while making a face like you didn't have to do that
After 15 minutes we arrived to the academy
"Ohayo" I Said greeting Sasuke who was sitting as always and as I took a seat next to him
"Ohayo Naruko" Said Sasuke with a little smile on his face
"Good morning Saku- AASHO!!! I...i'm sorry Sakura-Chan" said Naruto while making a confused face
I then chuckled a bit
"What's wrong Naruko?" Sasuke Asked
"Nothing maybe Naruto caught a cold, I wonder if it was from the cold water " I answered
Me and Sasuke were laughing then I saw my beloved brother is coming to me.
"Naruko TT.TT" Said Naruto
"Naruto what's wrong?" I Asked as I noticed that one of his cheeks was red
"Nothing Sakura-Chan just slapped me" He replied while making a sad face
"Okay that's it I'm going to show that pink haired girl" I said while getting mader and mader by the second
"Naruko calm down your going to get in troubles" Sasuke told me while making that don't-get-in-a-fight face
(There's something about Sasuke that can makes me calm down and relax when I look at him ..) In Naruko's Thought's
"Fine but if she did anything else to my Naruto she's going to pay for it" I mumbled


After 21 minutes it was the  time for the lunch brake
"Okay guys I'm going to get something from my house and come back fast" I told Naruto and Sasuke while reaching the academy gates
"Okay sis but don't be late" Naruto told me
"Don't be late Naruko you don't want to miss class's" Sasuke told me
"Hai hai don't worry i'm going to make it on time" I said while making a huge smile on my face then I left the academy and on my way home I saw ...
"Your going to come with me so don't try to escape" Said a man with a black coat with red clouds on it
"Who- who are you?!" I asked with fear, his eyes where red I was really scared
"Stop asking monster!" He replied
"Mo- monster? no I'm not a monster Wh- who are you?!" I cried out
"I'm Itachi and you are the eight tailed fox who attacked the village years ago.." said Itachi
"No no your lying" Then I tried to run away but he didn't let me
"Your not going anywhere monster ... You can come with me the easy way or the hard way its your choice" He warned me and I can tell that he is really strong and serious
"Then I choose the hard way lets fight" I replied (Okay.. this isn't a good idea I might die ..) I thought
With a few a seconds we were already fighting he was really  strong I knew that I'm going to lose
but I have to win no matter what ,I cant let him hurt Naruto or Sasuke
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!" I screamed in pain blood was coming out from my full body
I couldn't take it anymore I wasn't even able to stay consciousness I guess it's the end …
"Now the end" Said Itachi while coming to the place that my body was laying on
(I must move) I thought to my self


In the academy
Naruto's Pov:
"Naruto where are you going?" Sasuke Asked
"Sasuke.... Naruko is late I must go I'm worried" I answered
(I have a bad feeling myself) In Sasuke thought's "'i'm going with you loser" I told Naruto
"Okay let's go!!" I shouted
On the way to my house we saw a guy with black coat and a laying body on the floor and there was a lot of blood
"Wha- what is happening here?" I shouted
Then me and Sasuke went to the place where the body was laying to see what was going on and then we saw …
Naruto&Sasuke "NARUKO !!!"

To be continued .....
Naruto : Na- Naruko what happened to her?
Me : You have to wait to know hehe
Naruto : what ?! what did you do to my sister .. Sasuke help me here
Sasuke : Hn loser you just wait and your going to  know (I hope Naruko is fine)
Me : maybe she's going to die ..
Naruto&Sasuke : WHAT?!
Me : Just kidding hehe just wait
:iconglamrockernarukochan:
dun dun dun
what happined to naruko?
is naruko ganna die? or live?
if u wont to know wait for the next chapter

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:iconzeke224:
i have a question i thought you you were writing base on the show. why did you put itachi appearance now? B-)
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:iconglamrockernarukochan:
~GlamRockerNarukoChan Dec 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
my story isn't based on the show its something else :DDD
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:iconzeke224:
something else? what's the your story based on?:-?
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:iconglamrockernarukochan:
~GlamRockerNarukoChan Dec 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
my fantasy xDD
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~UzumakiUchiha101 Nov 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Epic story so far. :3 Oh BTW, your AVI is epic! :3 PKMN B/W 2 FTW! :3
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:iconglamrockernarukochan:
~GlamRockerNarukoChan Nov 8, 2012  Student Filmographer
xD glad you liked it hope you read this till the last chapter
i wrote and tell me what do you think
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~Ninlai Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist
Wow, this is getting pretty intresting :D
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:iconglamrockernarukochan:
~GlamRockerNarukoChan Jul 15, 2011  Student Filmographer
thz i dont know if im ganna write more in this story
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Mood: Joy ~Ninlai Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist
please do ! :D
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